Final feedback

We got positive and negative feedback from our class. I have produced a animation on 'GoAnimate' showing some of the comments we got from our audience. 

From the comments we made several improvements: 

     Some of which we intended on doing anyway such as adding a soundtrack. But both our feedback from the A2 and AS level students recommend that we should use a childlike soundtrack. We took this advice and it has helped us narrow down our search for an audio clip. However, even though we agree with this suggestion we do not want the childlike soundtrack to create a sinister horror theme.  

We are also going to add audio in on the end shot make a connection between the mother and daughter showing how the relationship has been broken.

We also made small changes to the colour, transitions and duration. 

There were some other feedback suggested by our audience, however we didn't make all the changes as we thought it didn't connote the meaning we were trying to suggest and these comments had been stated/supported by several people.